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My blood is black,
Yours is red,
That makes all the difference,

The hate, the bruises,
Maybe it's just my mother's love?

Ragnarok is my friend, or at least that's what I thought,
Friends are supposed to hurt me a lot,

Those screams, those cries,
I can hear them after they die,

Mother says it's okay though,
That those people deserved to go,

Just like those bunnies that I had to kill,
I stared after their hearts had become still,

The last one left had shivered and tried to run,
I brought down the sword and my job was done,

Mother let me stay out of the cell that night,
Because I had caused that disgusting sight,

She praised me and gave a grin
 I felt horrible and my stomach started to spin,

The killings were people from then on out,
I murdered without a single doubt,

Then I met Maka and tried to kill her too,
But she told me that we could be friends and pulled me through,

Now that I think on what I've done,
I don't deserve her,
I don't deserve anyone,

All this kindness being shown,
The seeds of guilt are being sowed,

I knew I should've died,
A long, long time ago,

My blood is black, 
So is my heart,

Just leave me alone in the dark.
A little something I thought up when Crona flashed across my mind. Based off of Crona's Poem(which we never got to see) in some episode of the anime. I cant remember which episode that is, so don't ask me.
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EDIT 5/14/2013
;~; Never thought this would be so popular. Thanks, guys. It's not too good, but it has so many likes and views.. I love you all... ;~;
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:iconaskinganidiot:
AskingAnIdiot Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  New member Student Artist
(( You inspired me)) 

Take a walk in my shoes.....and maybe then

You'll understand me......experience the pain
I've been through.....and maybe then you'll understand
Me.......

These cuts all over my body....they represent who I am....
These cuts all over my body...they prove I'm a fighter.....
So I say again...why don't you take a walk in my.....shoes?????

All the hatred its made me stronger.....its made me think...
That I can do better....its made me believe....that I will make
Somebody out of myself....and I won't let them bring me down.....

So lace up your shoes.....
And take a walk with me.....
Through my world.....
And maybe then you'll
Understand me......

These are cuts are there for a reason....
Its people like you that put them there....
When you told me that you don't care.....

So lace up your shoes.....
And take a walk with me.....
Through my world......
And maybe then you'll
Understand me.........

Through My World
Through My World
Through My World.....

You may think you've hurt me.
But I'm stronger then I'll ever
Be....and I won't let you bring me
Down........

I want to say Thank you. For
Making me the person that I am.
I'm stronger then ever before.....and
Its all thanks to you.......so thank you.......

So lace up your shoes....
And take a walk with me....
Through my world.....
And maybe then you'll
Understand me.....

Through My World
Through My World
Through My World.......
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zelinya-chan Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
*sits in the emo corner*
I wish i was never born T.T
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:iconlonesomemusicnote:
LonesomeMusicNote Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
T.T crona.... Crying Death the Kid Emote 
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:iconmahsenpais:
Mahsenpais Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*goes in emo corner* I wish I was never born...Llama Emoji-06 (Depress) [V1] Depressed 
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DE4dSH0T13 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Excalibur Icon excalibur can help... YOU FOOL!!!
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:iconis831fan9:
IS831fan9 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
. . . *sits in the emo corner* i wish i were never born..... no... ive got to power through these thoughts and be here for Crona! He/She needs to be comforted!! *gets up out of the emo corner and hugs crona* its alright.... your ok... im here for you...
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:icondemonzarecool101:
demonzarecool101 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
I wish I were never born *sits in corner*
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Cloudchaser500 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
That is amazing
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:iconcreepypastaking:
CreepyPastaKing Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Writer
:iconplznoplz:
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:iconcronacooper:
CronaCooper Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist
No way Crona! I'll always follow you... :iconpinkamenaplz:
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:icondragonslayer551:
Dragonslayer551 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
I wish I was never born *goes and hugs knees in a corner*
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:iconxodeaththekidox:
XoDeathTheKidoX Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Depressed...
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:iconalbinowerewolf729:
AlbinoWerewolf729 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
....This is the most depressing 'crona's poem' that ive read on here... Which means it was perfect!
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:iconmeicreepypasta:
MeiCreepypasta Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
*glomps Crona* It's not your fault...
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MeiCreepypasta Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Great poem, but I think Crona's poem would have had to be worse to bring BLACK STAR down. Guy's an idiotic, egotistic powerhouse!
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deaththekit Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
* goes into emo corner to grow mushrooms *


I wish I was never born .....
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:icontalya-th3-3vil-dj:
Talya-Th3-3vil-DJ Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is how I really feel... *cries*
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:iconheitilmna:
Heitilmna Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
*is happeh* I like it! I don't think Crona is a bad writer!
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:icondarkstrike17:
Darkstrike17 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist
I wish I was never born . . . *sits beside a wall*
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Sunset-Pony-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
aww this is super saddd.... 
"I wish i was never born..." hehe
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:iconnemaele:
nemaele Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014   Digital Artist
I wish I'd never read this...
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:iconfluffy-sama31:
Fluffy-sama31 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
I wish I had never come back to life :(
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:iconxanness:
Xanness Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
........ :iconcornerplz: I wish I'd never been born.......
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:icondannikins:
Dannikins Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this makes me wish i was never born ;;
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:icondeathgirlmorgaine:
deathgirlmorgaine Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Professional General Artist
I wish I'd never been born
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:iconsamuel707:
Samuel707 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wish.... that I'd never been born...
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:iconimightjustbecrazy:
iMightjustbecrazy Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish that I'd never been born.
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:iconbeatlemaniac01:
Beatlemaniac01 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I wish that I'd never been born. :iconsulkplz:
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monstermanga1022 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist

So sad!Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! 

Will! Not! Wish! To! Not! Be! Born!

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CrAzYsMiLeYfAcE01 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I had never been born. ;A;
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Crashbandicoot700 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I wish I had never been born
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:iconryan-neal:
Ryan-Neal Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
I wish I'd never been born
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:iconcodabear48:
CodaBear48 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
*Finishes reading and goes to the corner*
I wish I'd never been born...


In all seriousness though, great poem. It really does feel like Crona.
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:iconchisananamida:
ChisanaNamida Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
It's so... I can't stop reading it and crying... It's just....does perfect fit? Yes. It's perfect...
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:iconstellastarfish:
StellaStarfish Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Student General Artist
I wish i was never born...
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:iconcodelyoko-odd-lover:
CodeLyoko-Odd-Lover Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Wow well done! It is so good it sounds as if corona really did write that 
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:iconwolf0809:
wolf0809 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student General Artist
"i wish i was never born"
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:iconredxbacon:
redxbacon Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
awsome
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:iconruslancodelyoko:
RuslanCodeLyoko Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I wish I would never been born...
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:iconemj20:
EMJ20 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
wow... just wow
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summersafari Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
made me cry
:'-(
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fourswordsfan247 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
...i...i...i can't.... :icontearfulplz: hdhdnfkglhlhogkfbscqcshdjfnck....
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Anahiperez Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Artist
I wish i was never born !!!!!!  Crying Death the Kid Emote 
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:iconnagneto:
Nagneto Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nope. Didn't make me wish I was never born. Keep trying! lol
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:iconmelon-wolf:
Melon-Wolf Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...
Now I really qish I'd nver been born o_e
Good job though
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:iconquagmirefan1:
Quagmirefan1 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013   Digital Artist
*sits in dark corner* I wish I'd never been brought back to life.
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:iconmadamsugarhigh:
MadamSugarHigh Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
.....................i wish i'd never been born
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:icondead-man2124:
Dead-man2124 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
I wish I could meet Crona...
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Automan217 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wish I was never born......................
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Corrupted-Flower Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
*sits in corner*
I wish I was never born, I'm sorry for being alive
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